the biggest problem with this poster is no balance. There is too much empty space and a lack of details
For improvement: What is special about Vanilla Hills? Names of rides and attractions? Price of rides? dates and address?
Think about your audience. This park is for young children and their families!! Have you chosen the correct colors for this? Maybe it should be brighter.
The name of the park needs to be bigger..'vanilla hills'. You have not mentioned the names of the rides: high flyer and tunbler.
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Some good things on this poster.
the biggest problem with this poster is no balance. There is too much empty space and a lack of details
For improvement: What is special about Vanilla Hills? Names of rides and attractions? Price of rides? dates and address?
Think about your audience. This park is for young children and their families!! Have you chosen the correct colors for this? Maybe it should be brighter.
The name of the park needs to be bigger..'vanilla hills'. You have not mentioned the names of the rides: high flyer and tunbler.
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